Describe the place you will never forget

Question

Mam taki temat pracy i nie wiem jak sie za nia zabrać. Pomoże ktoś?

Answer 1

Jeśli porzednia wypowiedz ktora napisałam byla za krótka wiec moze ta:
              
          In 2005 on 7th October I was having awesome birthday party. I was(jakis wiek np: 18 ) and it was the best day I could ever dreamt. There were so many people I think above 100 so I had thousands of divine presents. Suddenly I saw little red envelope sent by XXX. For this day I don't know who sent it. So I opened the envelope. It was the ticket. The ticket to ... AFRICA!!! I was in heaven! I always wanted to go there but I had little money. Now my dream comed true. The ticket were for next holiday, in september. 'It will be the best holiday in all my life' I thinked.
         The finall day came. I was sitting in chair of cool plane. When we arrived to the place where I was living . Istopped for a minute. I was there. Here in Africa! 'Never mind' I thinked. I throwed up my luggage and go into the side of amazing views. I couldn't believe. Without the thought I took out my camera and took some photos. The nature was wonderfull.
          Days of the end of my trip came so quickly! But I don't think about it. For all this days I found many astounding things. I saw everything. Little maggot who was holding big piece of leaf. Giraffe who was so lazy that it made me laught. The desert, the drought and hunger. It isn't true that everything in my trip was so pink. I had to look at small kids with round belly because of hunger! I was eggy! Why the world is so cruel? Why people in USA have so many money but children In Afrika haven't?... I don't know.
         I'm content of me. I saw two sides of Arfrica so I can name me real traveller. This time I can recall moments when I have the best trip ever.
Memories won't fade. I have my beloved photos...
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Mam nadzieję, ze tym razem pomogłam. Jesli tak, daj mi proszę najlepszą odpowiedż lub chociaż małego plusika
Wierzę ze ta praca ci się przyda
Powodzenia ;)

Comments

dziękuję ;)

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comed? fajny wyraz :)

Answer 2

Oki... No to może być tak:

    Some time ago I was in fantastic place.It was very beautiful. I never forget about this waterfalls and sound of water. I heard there a lot of singing birds. I love that place. Over the horizon I could see amazing forest. Well... I even saw deer and wild boar. This was fantastic experience. I want to go back there.
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Mam nadzieję, że pomogłam. Powodzenia na lekcji liczę na + lub/i najlepszą odpowiedź :).
Pozdrawiam.

Answer 3

Last year I spent my holiday in wild Africa. I will never forget it.  I can say that, it was the best holiday in my life.  I love traveling so when i heard that this year I'm going to Africa I was in heaven. It was my birthday present. Africa is one of some many places where human can saw wild nature. I saw so many divine views, animals, flora. I was enchanted. After about thirty days I have to come back home. I was crying. In Africa I made new friends, and I felt this climate. Sometimes I say to my mother How about going to our Africa? I want to go here again and again.
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Sądzę, że takie coś może być. Mam nadzieję, żę pomogłam :))

Answer 4

Potrzebuje coś dłuższego bo to ma być praca kontrolna na koniec semestru :)